Re-Filming Scenes Part 2

Since my audience feedback mentioned a few texting errors I have headed out with Olivia today in order to re-film these scenes I have also recorded scene 7 a scene that I have just recently added as a few of my audience feedback forms mentioned that they thought the ending could end a bit differently.

Target Audience Feedback

In order to help me develop my short film further I asked 3 members of my target audience and 1 member of my secondary target audience to watch my short film and write down at least one positive point and one negative. After gathering all of their comments I then put them into a Visme to present the data. I am now planning on taking the feedback I have received and improving my short film in order for it to be as realistic as possible.

First draft of I Miss You

Having finished all of the filming and editing process I have uploaded the first draft of I Miss You to YouTube and have noticed a couple of errors that need to be fixed for example, during the first scene whist Imogen is texting Mason she types like instead of live. Due to this I plan on re-filming this scene however before I do I am planning on getting feedback from members of my target audience in order to help me develop my film further and to it's best potential in order to engage my audience.

Podcast

Re-Filming Scenes

From editing the first cut of my film and watching it through I have noticed that at one point in the film in scene 6, the one I have just recently re-filmed Olivia is wearing different clothing to what she is in the rest of the film. This is a major issue as the main body of the film was meant to be set on the same day as she is reliving moments Imogen and Mason spent with one another because of this I have been in contact with Olivia and we are going to head out tomorrow in order to re-film the scene again.

Editing the Music

Problems with Editing

I am currently in the process of editing all of the scenes together using IMovie however I have encountered a few issues, these being that IMovie is very slow and jumpy meaning its difficult to tell if each scene runs smoothly one after the other. It is also proving difficult to actually cut each piece of footage down as I am sometimes unable to see clearly at what point I have cut it however, I am working on trying to resolve the issue as soon as possible.