Media Studies: Editing Draft 1

Friday, 1 April 2016

Editing Draft 1

Taking into account my audience feedback I have begun edit the final cut of my film. I am planning on adding in a few extra clips as well as replacing a couple clips that there was issues with. The improvements include:

A re-filmed version of the first text message scene between Imogen and Mason
A clip of Imogen walking onto the bridge where the lock is
Added in scene 6 along with a text message scene between Imogen and her friend Sophie about Mason finding someone new
A clip of Imogen pinning her suicide note onto her mirror
Added in a final scene, scene 7 where Imogen receives a text from Mason after she's took her life.
Ensured the music ends on a soft note rather than ending quite abruptly

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Target A

To achieve my target my research, planning and evaluation must be detailed, effectively communicated and presented digitally, using a wide variety of formats. I need detailed
research into similar products and target audience and to show the process of planning by including excellent work on shotlists, drafts, storyboards, scripts, locations and props. I need to show full evidence of the research and planning informing the construction process.
My evaluation must reflect my excellent understanding of forms and conventions, an understanding of the use of new media throughout the stages of production, the way my ancillary and primary tasks combine effectively. There will be an excellent understanding of the significance of audience feedback.
My production work, across the formats, will demonstrates excellent creativity and imagination as I seek to make them as convincing as possible and it will also reflect my mastery
in technical skills such as controlled use of the camera, attention to framing, variety of shot sizes, close attention to mise-en-scène, appropriate transitions and use of sound.